Tuesday 11 April 2017

S.O.S (save our seas).

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19 comments:

  1. Anonymous11 April 2017 at 10:18

    Hi Jack H here and I think you have done a good job on this. Maybe to make it BtB you should make the slides longer for more time to read.
    Come check out my blog at: http://paroagreyjackh.blogspot.co.nz/

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    1. Anonymous23 June 2017 at 11:23

      kiOra my name is Emilio I really liked how you put save our sea. the Te WaKa Ako class learnt about sea creatures eat rubbish that goes to the sea because we litter and the rubbish that we drop on the ground goes down the drain and that rubbish that goes down the drain goes to the sea and animals think it`s food like plastic things. they think the plastic bags are jelly fish because when the bag move it looks like jelly fish.

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  2. Anonymous11 April 2017 at 10:19

    maybe you could slow it down a bit so we can read it and dont put distraction stuff in the background

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  3. Anonymous11 April 2017 at 10:20

    hi sinead i still can not see the words!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  4. Anonymous11 April 2017 at 10:20

    Hi its rhea and i can't really see the words on the page beacuse of the backrounds

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    1. Anonymous12 April 2017 at 12:39

      thank you for taking in my feed back and the backgrounds are way better thank you but in the video you could make it so the music was not so loud thanks

      Rhea

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  5. Anonymous11 April 2017 at 10:20

    Hi Sinead I think this is good I can't read it but it's GREAT!!!

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  6. Anonymous11 April 2017 at 10:20

    It was slower but just not easier to read you may want to change some of the back rounds
    Cheers sammi

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  7. Anonymous11 April 2017 at 10:21

    Kia ora,

    This is visually impressive! The video is great to watch and hopefully this will increase audience engagement and help you spread the message. I think that your new Wevideo skills came in very handy with this presentation. I hope that many people view this and start thinking about changing the way we use microfibre. I'm glad you extended the transitions so that we had time to read your text. The colours behind the text were too similar and made it difficult to read some of the words. This will be less of a problem on other devices.

    Cheers,

    Mr McAulay

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  8. Anonymous11 April 2017 at 11:01

    Hi Sinead I like your video and I really like all the info. to make it BTB you could make the slides longer thanks

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  9. Anonymous11 April 2017 at 11:03

    heelloooo sinead I LOOVVEE your presentation the text was a bit hard to read but other than that it was really good.the graphics were amazing. #SAVE THE SEEEEEAAAAAAAALLLLLLLLLLSSSSSS
    only a truly amazing person could wright a comment like this and that person is ME SAHARA!

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    1. Anonymous12 April 2017 at 12:39

      Hi Sahara,

      You will be happy to know that Sinead has taken onboard our feedback and made her video BTB! The new edit allows us enough time to read all of her information.

      Cheers,

      Mr McAulay

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  10. Anonymous11 April 2017 at 11:04

    Hi Sinead, amazing work on the slides but it would be better if you could make the slides a bit longer and clearer

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  11. Anonymous11 April 2017 at 11:32

    Hi Sinead its caitllan here you should change the blue back round

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  12. Anonymous12 April 2017 at 12:38

    Thanks for going back and makeing it slower

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  13. Anonymous12 April 2017 at 12:39

    your new video is so much better i like how you took on board our feed back and made it 10 times better kamo te wehi

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  14. Anonymous12 April 2017 at 12:40

    hi sinead
    your video looked much better when you changed the backgrounds but when it reads the firs paragraph you cant realy see the words.

    cheers,

    Mia

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  15. Anonymous12 April 2017 at 12:40

    thank you for making it slower

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  16. Anonymous12 April 2017 at 12:40

    Hi your mate Ella here amazing job I love your facts And also this for the new one!

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